page.title=Writing Style page.tags=dialog,toast,notification @jd:body
When writing text that appears in your app, keep it concise, simple, and friendly.
Avoid wordy, stilted text
Consult the documentation that came with your phone for further instructions. |
Read the instructions that came with your phone. |
Don't provide unnecessary information
Signing in... |
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Your phone needs to communicate with Google servers to sign in to your account. This may take up to five minutes. |
Signing in... |
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Your phone is contacting Google. This can take up to 5 minutes. |
Focus on the user's concern, not technical details
Manually control GPS to prevent other apps from using it |
To save power, switch Location mode to Battery saving |
Put top news first
77 other people +1’d this, including Larry Page |
Larry Page and 76 others +1’d this |
Put the user's goal first
Touch Next to complete setup using a Wi-Fi connection |
To finish setup using Wi-Fi, touch Next |
Avoid being confusing or annoying
Sorry! |
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Activity MyAppActivity (in application MyApp) is not responding |
MyApp isn’t responding |
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Do you want to close it? |
Don't use | Use |
one, two, three, four, ... | 1, 2, 3, 4, ... |
application | app |
cannot, could not, do not, did not will not, you will | Contractions: can’t, couldn’t, don’t, didn’t won’t, you’ll, and so on |
okay, ok | OK |
please, sorry, thank you | Attempts at politeness can annoy the user, especially in messages that say
something has gone wrong. Exception: In Japanese, “please” is mandatory and imperative verbs should be localized accordingly (turn on -> please turn on). |
there is, there are, it is and other “disappeared” subjects (grammatical expletives) |
Use a noun as the subject |
abort, kill, terminate | stop, cancel, end, exit |
fail, failed, negative language | In general, use positive phrasing (for example, “do” rather than “don’t,” except in cases such as “Don’t show again,” “Can’t connect,” and so on.) |
me, I, my, mine | you, your, yours |
Are you sure? Warning! | Tell user the consequence instead, for example, “You’ll lose all photos and media” |